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Critique my Marth

KosukeKGA

Smash Champion
Joined
Dec 4, 2007
Messages
2,165
Location
Phoenix, AZ
Grab and chaingrab more. Be thankful that Fox you're playing doesn't do any annoying crap like a real Fox player would. He's just throwing out attacks. **** him for it.

And for that one gimp around 1:14, just wait for him to initiate Fire Fox then weak hit Fair him and recover.

...@1:24: This isn't Brawl. Those tricks won't work there. Just throw him off and gimp him. It's not as hard as it sounds, really.

<.< Alright, so you can gimp. Just practice being consistent, I suppose.
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Ryuuk

Smash Rookie
Joined
Aug 8, 2007
Messages
7
Grab and chaingrab more. Be thankful that Fox you're playing doesn't do any annoying crap like a real Fox player would. He's just throwing out attacks. **** him for it.

And for that one gimp around 1:14, just wait for him to initiate Fire Fox then weak hit Fair him and recover.

...@1:24: This isn't Brawl. Those tricks won't work there. Just throw him off and gimp him. It's not as hard as it sounds, really.

<.< Alright, so you can gimp. Just practice being consistent, I suppose.
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Thank you for the fast reply and advice.You have a nice day too :]
 

elvenarrow3000

Smash Master
Joined
Jul 22, 2007
Messages
3,308
Jump cancel your grabs if you aren't already. If you are already, elevate your consistency.

Learn how far you can go out to gimp, so you don't die.

Um. What was 1:28 about? Just throw him.

You're not dashdancing very much... I would do it more. It'd make it so that you don't get hit by so much predictable stuff.

I'd look at your edgeguarding more. You're doing unnecessary things and that's costing you lives and kills. Just keep it simple.

I like that you're trying to aerial into grab, but look before you grab. Otherwise you're just whiffing grabs and giving your opponent chances to punish you.

Don't shorthop double fair so much on the approach. It's not as good as you think it is.
 

Sybawave

Smash Ace
Joined
Mar 29, 2008
Messages
728
Location
Friendswood, Texas
I replied lol

That song on the video was the most amazing thing in the world lol I wish I heard this so much sooner lol

But yeah I posted my response on your video <_<
 

Ryuuk

Smash Rookie
Joined
Aug 8, 2007
Messages
7
I replied lol

That song on the video was the most amazing thing in the world lol I wish I heard this so much sooner lol

But yeah I posted my response on your video <_<
Yeah it is pretty awesome,it's F.C.P.R.E.M.I.X by The Fall Of Troy :]
 

Lanstar

Smash Journeyman
Joined
May 4, 2008
Messages
452
Location
Socal, San diego
others have covered most of the advice

don't get over anxious and throw out moves that will get you punished even if the move you are spamming means a guaranteed win
 

Miggz

Pancake Sandwiches
Joined
May 28, 2007
Messages
1,473
Location
Bermuda [We Gotz De Triangle]
Hey do you own a copy of smash? I hope you do because you can practice your technical skill in peace and at your own pace. Anyway, you have to improve your SHFFL game. Practice short hopping. You did a lot of full jumping and I'm guessing those were botched short hops. Next is your canceling. You have to keep in mind that the timing of the l cancel varies depending on what you hit. There is a timing for when you hit your foe, hit your foe's shield and simply do an aerial that hits nothing. Understanding the timing of all three is essential.

Oh and stop approaching with fair all the time. It become very predictable. Start blending in dash dashing. You know what's another trick I love doing? Dash up to your foe and then put up your shield. There is a good chance they might spot dodge and after they do that you can get in a grab. I'll leave that advice for you for now. Be sure to post for videos and keep us posted. Oh Don't forget to start JC your grabs. =P

Your edge guard were you smacked Fox out of his illusion was good by the way. You got the skill, just have to practice more and you'll be even better. ^^
 
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