Critique my improved Ganondorf

[Bizzarro Flame]

Ganondorf (Bizz) vs. TheP (Fox)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iJCnf_5Xzx4

(New) Ganondorf (Bizz) vs. DanX (Dr. Mario)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gGF4B3eZU0k


(Note: My friend's (TheP's) controller is currently having problems because it's R-shoulder button and joystick is not functioning to it's fullest potential)


Any comment/suggestion is very much appreciated.

 

[DippnDots]

First match: Besides missing a few wavedashes and wavelands, you also didn't really apply them too well. You squandered a couple edge guarding opportunities as well, work on that. The spacing in this match wasn't too good either.

Second match: Better than the first, still need to improve on spacing.

Didn't watch the third match

Overall, you need to grab more and work on your tech chasing. You also seem to be really rushed, you had some combo opportunities that you wasted because you didn't wait a little bit before starting the next move.

I also kind of get the feeling that you aren't watching your opponent all of the time, try to do that, and if you are already, good job!

 

[spider_sense]

Yeah, your Ganon isn't bad at all, keep working with the wave landing, and make sure to be patient and have fox come to you, and you need to learn to edge guard a tad better. If fox is going to use his forward B, diagonal tilt, if he's slightly below the stage, run off (don't jump off) and punch his a*^

 

[Linguini]

Jason My Man!
Waddup

 

[Bizzarro Flame]

Thanks for the critiques guys....

My apologies about the missed wavelands, I was beginning to incorporate it in order to increase the speed of my Ganny.

One question though. How can I edge-guard better against fox with the exception of diagonal-tilting? U-air after grabbing the edge seems risky to me. -_-

Thnx in advance.