Critique my ganon

[falco_4_life]

aight tell me what u think about my ganon and if u can tell me what i need to work on

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhZIDMk6hH4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xtdaja8TIkU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2La1l3Ba-DY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWH5gqFHTNI

 

[Pyrostormer]

Wavedash! The only time I saw you wavedash was when you killed your oponent. Don't roll so much either, you could get severely punished for it.. Dont use Fair as your only approach. Chaingrab too. I saw you d-throw to jab and that's about it. Also, Dash Dancing can be VERY helpful like DD -> JCG -> Chainthrow, Or DD -> Pivoted F-tilt or F-smash. Ledgehop Uair! You can get some nice distance between you and your opponent... Or you could do Ledgedash (sp? term?)

That's all I can think of right now. Sorry if I sound harsh. Not trying to be.

 

[falco_4_life]

nall its cool. thats why i put the vids. up. and i couldn't chaingrab cause my z doesn't work on that controller. n i JC grab when i do dat

 

[bjdavis420]

I agree with Pyrostormer, some more wavedashing and wavelanding (on platforms at Yoshi's Island) would definetly benefit you. I have to ask, those black lines running down the tv screen, are they as bad in real life as they are when I watch on youtube? Not to be a jerk, but those things were really bothering me just watching, I couldnt imagine playing with those showing up. The ledgehop-Uair is always a nice technique as well, or ledgehop-waveland can be helpful and surprise ur opponent if they are not expecting it. Nice job l-cancelling, just keep practicing.

 

[falco_4_life]

thanks. the black lines are cause by the camera. they aren't really there while we play.