Critique my Fox

[TimpZ]

Well I didn't really want to start a whole new thread but there's none stickied and many critique threads to choose from so I'm guessing the standard is to just make a new thread? Mods, feel free to merge with another thread if you so please.

Anyway here's some footage of netplay (~2 frames of input lag): http://www.twitch.tv/timpz/v/5979107?t=16m40s
(YT mirror: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OrrR_YgbREk#t=16m40s)

Feel free to judge my other characters as well but remember I'm only serious with Fox and Falco.

(here's a comparison to a bit over half a year ago: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qBciqvIC_mY#t=2h50m, I've been playing since around march 2014 for reference)

OH and BTW I'm playing PAL as much as possible.

 

[Flippy Flippersen]

It would be far wiser to get people to critique your offline matches since online has some questionable moments.
Outside of that I recommend not fullhopping nearly as much as this. (and not missing l cancels but I think that's a fairly obvious thing)
As well as the most important thing. You're blindly going in and in a lot of cases with moves that on whiff are pretty awful. (smash attacks, dash attacks, that missed shine bair offstage)
I only watched the match you timestamped but if you look back on it you'll see that not a single neutral moment goes by where you're not going in.
So I guess dash dance, wait for/create openings and exploit those. Don't carelessly go in whenever.

Edit also in the duration of a year and a bit you've been to 5 tournaments. You might wanna go to a few more tourneys if you wanna get really good. (tournament experience is mad legit yo)

 

[TimpZ]

I think that's fairly true, thanks! Also I am going to as many tournaments as I can, we don't have weeklies or even monthlies where I live :/.