Critique my fox please :)

[Moxin]

I got to play some matches vs t1mmy at my first tournament, and I was missing stupid stuff like basic tech rolls, shine reverse firefox ledgegrab, and jc upsmashes(lol). So I know I should practice some more tech :x.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NvIYPGx7A6w Moxin(fox) vs t1mmy (kirby)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ccj8VyRJLuo Moxin (green) vs t1mmy (white)

Any critiques help. Thanks!

 

[Moxin]

Anybody? :o

 

[Zatchiel]

Pretty sexy, a bit more waveshining should do. Also, switch up with your OoS options, it could help you a lot if you went with Reflector to get offensive and retreat wavedash as a GTFO resort.
Overall, nice, very nice.

 

[Moxin]

Alright, working on shine oos, it's like 60% consistent :> thanks for the reply.

 

[GOD!]

lol I just watched a fox laser camp a kirby.

It's a good strat but was kind of funny anyway.

EDIT

Just some basic stuff I saw (ditto):

Around 1:25 you did a bair to a nair follow up that killed him. He had a second jump and definitely had time to jump out, so just be aware that a lot of players in that situayion won't fall into basic stuff like that. Knowing what combos and what doesn't is key, if that makes sense.

Right after that you have a super low percent uthrow to utilt.. which didn't stun him at all and got him out of a lot of damage. Just make sure you know that at some percents, some options are better than others (in this case, regrab, nair, or usmash would all have been better).

@1:51 You're in a great position to bair him off the stage with no jump and at the very worst trade a bair with him. But instead you run away lasering.

You look like you're a smart player but you still do some dumb stuff that I do some time. You wavedasgh a lot for no real reason, especially when there's a lot of space between you and your opponent. In general, just try and get to know your character and know why you do things. Hope this helps.

 

[Moxin]

Yeah, I'm glad you pointed out that I wasn't reacting to DJs, I generally didn't think of that during the tournament and I'm going to start working on it. I was kind of disappointed in my choice of utilting after that throw when I could have just brought it back with a chaingrab-> usmash-> read or something. Nerves got me there, lol.

I didn't know the kirby strat so I'm like, "play it like it's jiggs" hahaha. Thanks for the advice.

EDIT: And yeah for some reason I wasn't paying as much attention to zoning as I do in friendlies so I was wavedashing to keep myself occupied because my hands weren't really staying still that well, if that makes sense lol. So knowing why I do things was a good way of putting it.