Critique my Dorf-man plz

[n0ne]

Topic.

1st of all i did not upload this video (btw what is up with that nonsense music) It was a friend of mine that interchanged the names, and does not want to edit the title. the actual fight was

Dorf (n0ne) vs Seph (Falcon)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TQ_kj4IWOjc

Plz critique. As a matter of fact i hadnt really noticed but i dont have any ganonfights of mine except this one.. maybe when i see the gang I will record more. thx in advance

***UPDATE May 31st/2010
new vids. No sound... dont know why i had a conflict on my pc but its fixed. Next time therell be audio for sure. and slow video response time .. does anyone know why this could be? maybe my lcd moniter? im on a capture card.
so yeah. here...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gkqjUtLX1UQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t1Pi8YWEA4M
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cfh7jJ1CCtE

 

[spider_sense]

All I gotta say about that vid is this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x0zEU08rkvA

Lol You did extremely well vs Falcon. Next time though if you know he's going to come in with a nair, and there's a noticeable distance between you two, throw out a retreating fair followed with an approach. Most of the time, if Ganon runs right up on Falcon they shield, (This falcon liked to stay in his shield for a bit) so you can run up and grab, pretty situational I know but works very well.

 

[n0ne]

lol at video response. Alright thx... i like to use bair more though ... falcon has nuthin against it... the least falcon can do against it is trade hits. but yeah ure right.

 

[n0ne]

bumpity bump.

 

[n0ne]

Updated first post.

 

[Dart!]

Good ****. game one of the new stuff made me super happy. i love your ganon, its tricky like mine. you should just hold ledge more instead of going for uair gayness all the time. unless these are just friendlies of course

watch out about using your jump too early, falcon eats them up then knees the **** out of you and you get kinda screwed from there. goods hit none the less