Critique Me Please

[Leviathan741]

So I'm back still playing this game... trying to make Falcon fun even against fox and fox and fox and fox and sheik and falco. I hate all 3 of them.

Anyways, can someoene help me out here? I suck still.

My sets start at 1:50:00 and 2:18:00

So please help me out

 

[CyberZixx]

I don't see a link to the video.

 

[Leviathan741]

http://www.twitch.tv/smashalaroux/b/443868151

ITs part of this video. Completely forgot to put up the link lol