criticism please?

[metashinryu]

hi people,i finally got a(****ty)camera to upload some vids,could you give me some advice/criticism on my falcon?

These are all falcon dittos

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v3kSpyH-_d4

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YQHKCzNbmTU&feature=channel

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-pwxsolyFMk&feature=channel

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NnOdEHOXXrU&feature=channel

and as a bonus: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yuZGdNW23yo&feature=channel

the guy im playing is better than me(well,maybe not better but he does has more time playing) but he was just having fun,he mains GnW

i have like 5 months playing melee(like,4 with ATs) and stopped last month cuz i didnt have a copy of the game,it feels good to play again XD

 

[Defqon.1]

Pretty good considering how long you've been playing. The most obvious thing I took away from the videos was your DI. You should DI upwards for attacks that send you horizontal. It'll save you from getting knee'd/a lot of things/Sheik slapped across the stage and downwards to your untimely death.

Use dashdancing more instead of throwing out random aerials all the time, cause those'll eventually get you punished. Grabs are your best friend. I don't know what else to tell you, really. You've got consistency besides the occasional b-throw and dash attack. The best advice I can give you is to get out there and play as many different, good players as you can. Learning matchups through experience will help you more than anything.

 

[metashinryu]

Pretty good considering how long you've been playing. The most obvious thing I took away from the videos was your DI. You should DI upwards for attacks that send you horizontal. It'll save you from getting knee'd/a lot of things/Sheik slapped across the stage and downwards to your untimely death.

Use dashdancing more instead of throwing out random aerials all the time, cause those'll eventually get you punished. Grabs are your best friend. I don't know what else to tell you, really. You've got consistency besides the occasional b-throw and dash attack. The best advice I can give you is to get out there and play as many different, good players as you can. Learning matchups through experience will help you more than anything.

thanks man,for a moment there i thought these boards sucked since no one really cared on giving me some advice...

im trying to get di down,i just dont react in time XD

 

[_Rocky_]

Practice sweetspotting the ledge, meteor cancelling and ledgeteching. He got quite a few dair kills as you were recovering from below, which you could have prevented quite easily.

Also, I didn't see you ledgehop at all in any of the matches, and you should definitely implement it into your game since it gives you so many options from the ledge. Just remember to use it with caution.

 

[metashinryu]

Practice sweetspotting the ledge, meteor cancelling and ledgeteching. He got quite a few dair kills as you were recovering from below, which you could have prevented quite easily.

Also, I didn't see you ledgehop at all in any of the matches, and you should definitely implement it into your game since it gives you so many options from the ledge. Just remember to use it with caution.

i m good at ledgeteching,but i just dunno what to do,if i try to ledgetech and fail i lose the opportunity to meteor cancel avd vice-versa,and this are my first falcon dittos vs someone good EVER(which got me nervous,as you could see in those bthrows,i tried to dthrow...),and i still dont get the timing on falcons dair meteor cancel

i do ledgeteching a lot,but this guy wont let me attack,he will just shieldgrab me or outta shield knee,he did it in the matches before these(which i couldnt film)

 

[DtJ Jungle]

You roll alot, it gets predictable.

YOu also don't follow up alot of you rmoves, alot of times you couldve had combos going but you were too slow to follow up.

Not bad considering how long you've been playing though.