creative ike critisism needed

[GSTLA]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=goM1VSmFBhU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RgRt657coM4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=enzoGDjyMPY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xvscy_AuW70
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qvl8yuzT_-E
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qjL3EDVqpuY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e00DiND3i80
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AenLlTugbdM

okie ya as above.

please note: people make mistakes and can learn from them

another note: sometimes the way i play depends solely on my current motivtion

 

[Rykoshet]

<_< well for one, DI -ANYWHERE- so you dont get hit by that down throw combo... ill keep watching.

Edit: From the first vid, I'd say you could learn something from your friend roxas. He had much better spacing and command of grabbing out of both of you. Both of you should just stop using quick draw as a recovery from the angles you were doing them though.

Second vid: he could have caught you with that exact same down throw combo but instead you kinda died trying to recover with quick draw again >_> at least he was nice enough to kill himself in return.

Hey you DI'd on your last stock, nice.