Check my bro's Olimar. (Updated with new and improved friendlies!)

[Dr Peepee]

My brother, Twitch, was inspired by NC-Echo and decided to pick up Olimar recently, and I think that he's doing pretty well. Please feel free to comment/critique as necessary.

Listed from oldest to newest:

(vs Marth)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUGePCewmpg (not a good matchup for him, my Marth does well vs Olimar)
(vs Mario)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6BY9hWLJI9o
(vs Mario)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VoSJrl63xTg
(vs Mario)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A2-64WmCjFw

Sorry bout all of the Mario, but I'm not great with many characters.

Thanks in advance for all the advice!

EDIT: Much better vids of his Olimar up now. These should be easier to critique.

(vs Mario) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1CkdO0RruTc
(vs Marth) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XeExthJEx20

Huh, I meant to put up more, but I think that these should do fine. Thanks for the love Olimar boards!

 

[keeper]

He lacks whistle, Olimar combos, priority knowledge, and he moves extremely slowly. Needs to work on spacing too.

 

[Dr Peepee]

Ok thanks. Could you possibly elaborate on the combos and maybe some spacing tips?

 

[Zori]

Hmmm i would say your brother knows how to assort pikmin well he would throw white pikmin at the right time Thats pretty much all i saw that was good, like keeper said no 'Combos' no items Olimar only, DISTANT PLANET! what am i taking about..... just tell your brother dthrow - upsmash- natural a- pikmin chain= Zori combo?!?!!?!? you decide.

 

[Dr Peepee]

I'll get on him about not getting any combos. Hopefully he can figure something out, and I'll tell him what I can from reading NC-Echo's guide.

 

[Kabuto Mushi]

Hmmm i would say your brother knows how to assort pikmin well he would throw white pikmin at the right time Thats pretty much all i saw that was good, like keeper said no 'Combos' no items Olimar only, DISTANT PLANET! what am i taking about..... just tell your brother dthrow - upsmash- natural a- pikmin chain= Zori combo?!?!!?!? you decide.

How do you get the neutral air to hit well after the Upsmash? I always miss it.

 

[keeper]

How do you get the neutral air to hit well after the Upsmash? I always miss it.

Jump? I prefer the Uair.

 

[Zori]

How do you get the neutral air to hit well after the Upsmash? I always miss it.

Yeah like keeper said just jump lol it works at low percents nobody expects it.

 

[shrinkray21]

Jump? I prefer the Uair.

same - the nair requires an opponent to make a mistake.

 

[slayeriku]

On the second video at the beginning, your bro let marth fly away without any intention of atking him after the up smash

 

[Dr Peepee]

I know that Twitch has a problem with following up. I've put up some new vids where I think you can see he tried to correct that along with some other basic problems. Critique away.