Advice for my Falcon?

[Roman.]

Yeah been trying to work on him, he really is my favorite character to play as by far. If you have tips or compliments, don't hesitate to post them even if others have said the same thing. It will only make me look into it deeper. Thank you in advance for anyone who takes the time to watch my Falcon. =)

vs Ganon

vs Marth

vs Doc

vs Ness I loled at 1:26-1:29 and 4:24 (too much ****)

 

[ThatGuy]

Well, you need to work on your L-cancelling, especially on those SHFFL'd Dairs (you even had trouble fastfalling them, this is a crucial flaw in your combo game).

You need to learn how to combo, as I didn't really see any. You kept building up "useless damage" (as I like to call it) to the point where you could not connect any moves and had a hard time trying to finish your opponent. Try to get more going from your grab game, since it currently consists of Grab -> Beat Up -> Throw -> Nothing.

Work on your recovery. I nearly had to laugh out loud at the amount of times where you got thrown off the edge, and you would double jump and airdodge immediately. You need variety or you're going to get *****.

Anyways, that's what I observed; otherwise, keep at it.