Recent content by Chucklez

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QzTr7yaCJTg I would love this as aTHP...please? Thank you.

Epilogue The world was a blur. My vision was a long tunnel within a thick haze. I passed through the camp without a thought towards my colorless surroundings. I feel nothing yet I feel everything. There were no obstacles in my way...at least ones that weren’t met with a bullet to the head...

Chapter 10 up.

Chapter 8 and 9 released together. Expect Chapter 10 tomorrow and the Epilogue before Wednesday.

Chapter 7 is up! Whoo! The last two chapters will be up after I return from vacation. Then the epic epilogue.....will come.

Chapter 6: The Journey Begins The ride home would have been an enjoyable one for any soldier. They told fascinating stories of their kills and their part in the mission. Some told of their families back home. Others of the antics of youth. However; I am no soldier. I’m not even human anymore...

Ok Im back from vacation. Expect chapter 6 tomorrow!

Chapter 5 Chapter 5: Let Slip the Dogs of War The rain-doused wind swept up from every direction. Its cold tail whipped into the air and smacked against my body. I could feel the tingle of the tiny droplets, but the only droplets I wanted was blood. The Regulator teams had all been...

See, I wasn't scared. I feel no peer pressure. I'm glad you plan on using my advice. I wish you the best of luck with your story. The better you get and the more stories you write; you will soon find a vibe going when you write. Soon, you'll begin to experiment with new ways to write. Like...

Yes, it is. Chapter 4 is up!

I like this story. It will take me time to read it all, but I like it. Tips to notice: Be sure you keep from repeating words constantly: Repetition will ruin your flow and the reader will become bored. You want the reader to become engaged in your use of ever-changing and expansive words...

By all means, no, its not that. I'm trying to encourage some feedback. I want to know how the readers feel on my story. I can't do that if they aren't encouraged to freely speak out.

Chapter 3 is up. Did I scare you guys off? What up with this lack of interest?

Tyranitar wins. Generally speaking, the faster predator usually wins. Speed is always a key in a fight. But how does a speedy predator take down an opponent that is 235.9 Lbs bigger with rock-hard skin? It can't. Despite how fast Garchomp is, Tyranitar will have few places where it can be...

That. Was. Hawt. But seriously, you have an idea for eco? Seeing as how I argued all day about it, I'd like to hear it.