Recent content by raul

Hi Blackadder, I just finished reading your story and I have some comments for you. However, before I get into detail, I have a brief overview of the entire story. First off, I did not find it that bad at all. I felt like I was walking right into the middle of a conversation and the only...

Hi Jam, I just finished reading your tale and I have posted a few comments at the bottom. I'll mention briefly that you have some mistakes with quote marks (Some are missing), which won't ruin your story, but sometimes I didn't realize I was reading dialogue. Comments: 1.) Your...

Hi Scarves. I read your story and I have a few comments for you. Hopefully they will be helpful to you now and perhaps in the future. Overall, while I don't feel you really "wow"-ed anyone, your story was by far not nearly as bad as others I have read. The word limit I feel constraint your...

The orange suits me for my part time is with home depot and goes well with my orange pick up and orange softball bat.

I'd like to thank the judges for an inspiring prompt. While I am grateful to have come in first, I truly appreciate the competition for it has allowed me to grow as a writer, which of course is the most important aspect. I hope everyone enjoyed the story as I enjoyed reading theirs. Congrats...

Hey redcell, how did that project turn out?

I guess thats next friday?

So, are we ever going to hear from the other judges?

Ok Crimson King, I 've finished reading your piece and it was good, but I have some issues with it. First, in the beginning your character says all the main character wanted for his/her 13th birthday is to learn to shave, but then you say the manin character is's 17 later on, so my confusion...

This sounds cool, I'll probably enter.

BEST POST EVER. Ok Red, a money works as such: I pay cash to either the bank or any place that creates money orders, such as wal-mart for example and they give me a check for a certain amount that I make out to you and then I mail it to you. When you get it, you go to the bank and cash it...

As am I. I would be more than happy to judge, if one is needed.

It's a basically a guaranteed check

Redcell, you've got me very excited for this printed project you're putting together. Whether I win or not, I want a copy. My question is: Will you accept a money order?

Hey Jam! It's good to see you back in action.