Yet another critique thread.

[Vorde]

Hey there,
Been posting on smashboards for a while, and finally have streaming equipment at my house
Hoping someone with more experience than me could look at some footage and let me know what they think I should improve etc
My past broadcasts are @
http://www.twitch.tv/vorde
My tag is always KALL and I almost always play Fox
PS. This is another way to see how a small scene is doing, since we helped build it a little more than a year ago. Thanks!
EDIT: Also this is recent as well!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FYK454n0kXw

 

[Vorde]

No love for the fox main

 

[MysticSkarps]

Most of your attacks will be shield grabbed, and you use f smash too much. You need to learn how to waveshine and mix up your moves.

 

[Flippy Flippersen]

Going with the first match of your edit since it had a lot to critique already and based on what I've seen you prolly would make a lot of simular mistakes.

Stop rolling so much in neutral. Rolling is a useful tool but best used very sparingly.

I saw no dashdancing. Dashdancing is good cause it gives you time to see what you can do best.

So many dash attack approaches. Dash attack isn't particularly safe. Against falcon it's far from your biggest reward. The only reason to use your dash attack on falcon is for some weird mindgames. Shine him, nair him, grab him. Those are your ideal approaches.

Even though I already voiced the lack of dashdance I'm gonna say is again. Don't always rush in. Take your time just moving around making falcon feel uncomfortable. Your uptilt beats a lot of his approaches. Don't be afraid to let him do something unsafe.

 

[MysticSkarps]

I have a question. Why is the falcon pretty much using knee as the only approach option?