vids of me, Flan

[FlanWielder]

as marth of course >_> im the white one.

falcon is my main.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAMkvCAjSCs

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aimnlYP1Pro

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1gdIP9HT0j8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLUNkUHU3YM

comments please. much appreciated.

 

[DynamicDuo]

u dash sh to A alot u really should limit it to certain openings, lcanelings on both of u is a little sloppy but just a little, i would recommend u practice reverse up b's. U have no idea how helpful that move is, especially when the opponent is at high damage.

 

[FlanWielder]

Bump, i need more critiques

 

[Imperial Wraith]

Your Marth is ok. I noticed a lot of random Fsmashes, you should try to lead into them more. Random Fsmashes = Gateway to punisment.

Spacing was also an issue, lots of those fairs and nairs would have got ya shield grab. Towards the ends of the matches, this was improving though, which is good xD.

There were also a lot of times you guys were standing around doing nothing. Try dashdancing or trying to fake him out during those times, it can lead to them making mistakes and racking up heavy damage. It also makes your Marth more fluid.

Edgeguarding seemed to be an issue for both of you. Ledgehopped Bairs, Dtilts and even Fsmashes would be very useful in this position.

But your getting there, so keep practicing your l-canceling and spacing, and you should improve in no time.

 

[Roche_CL]

try sometimes get out of a shield with SH Fair, its nice to start combos with it.

also, if you wanna go to a smash after a grab, it's better Fthrow, you grab and throw fast so he doesnt DI, and in some % you'll get a tipper.

as imperial said, edgeguard with Fsmash, Dtilt or if you want to impress, Spike them to death >:] (from a full jump)
hahaha

 

[Johnny Christ]

you should try to mess with your opponent's mind when your at the edge. Try hopping off the edge and grabbing it again to make him think your going to fair him. Then attack while hes open. Nair-ing may also work if he's apparently going to shield your attack.