mmhm :\ like they said, play more people.. but then again you think about it, and brawl is coming out soon, but then you think WELL 3X, WHAT IF BRAWL ISN'T GOING TO BE GOOD? (are ppl still gonna play melee?) :\ bleeh, whether the case may be, i hope people still play melee, but anyways, i'm getting off topic..
so, things you should work on.. definately tech skill, work on shffling, and your SHL, also work on your edgeguard :$.
One quick thing i noticed, everytime your grabbed, you always did a down throw, alot of people like to use the down throw to shine cause they're used to fighting computers, yea, against a human it's easy to tech that, I like to use up throw, it leads to an aerial, whether it be a nair, bair or even a dair.
But yea, once again, do what you want.. whether you continue playing melee while brawl is still out, those are just some things you should work on I guess, i know i'm definately going to still be playing melee, i love the game, and i think it's really lame how alot of people are already assuming that brawl is going to be the best game ever, and that it is going to take melee's place.