Hydra.
Smash Lord
Post your poem(s), Rate others 1-10 (1 being terrible and 10 being amazingly awesome), Please put in a comment on what you thought of the poem, what you liked and didn't like.
Remember to not be rude! Diffrent poems mean diffrent things to diffrent people, It could be really touching to one person and could mean nothing to anouther.
Remember people put alot of time and emotion into their poems.
Have fun with this. =D
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Here's my poem. (I'll probably post more later) -This was wrote, 3.20.09-
We Came To See You
My happiness lies with,
Someone within myself,
But they are weak and small,
So they sleep all the time,
With arms wrapped hugging their legs,
And face fallen into their knees,
She waits there alone, Always just sitting.
It's cold and dark,
There is no sound at all,
She never flintches,
She never even moves,
You could easily mistake her as dead.
I was walking,
We were going to see you,
We walked up those steps,
And waited for a while,
I was a bundle of nerves,
Not knowing what to say,
But no one awnsered so I walked away,
But then your father yelled after me, hey,
And after talking to him I knew you were there,
He went to get you,
And the person within myself opened her eyes,
And her head rose, Thinking to herself she might of heard someone there,
But within seconds she fell back asleep,
You didn't want to come out...
Remember to not be rude! Diffrent poems mean diffrent things to diffrent people, It could be really touching to one person and could mean nothing to anouther.
Remember people put alot of time and emotion into their poems.
Have fun with this. =D ----------------------------------------
Here's my poem. (I'll probably post more later) -This was wrote, 3.20.09-
We Came To See You
My happiness lies with,
Someone within myself,
But they are weak and small,
So they sleep all the time,
With arms wrapped hugging their legs,
And face fallen into their knees,
She waits there alone, Always just sitting.
It's cold and dark,
There is no sound at all,
She never flintches,
She never even moves,
You could easily mistake her as dead.
I was walking,
We were going to see you,
We walked up those steps,
And waited for a while,
I was a bundle of nerves,
Not knowing what to say,
But no one awnsered so I walked away,
But then your father yelled after me, hey,
And after talking to him I knew you were there,
He went to get you,
And the person within myself opened her eyes,
And her head rose, Thinking to herself she might of heard someone there,
But within seconds she fell back asleep,
You didn't want to come out...
