Team is Updated (11/23) RMT @ Help Please!!!

[Lit]

Forretress @Leftovers
Ability:Sturdy
Bold Nature
EVs: 252 HP / 120 Def / 136 SpDef
- Rapid Spin
-Stealth Rock
-Toxic Spikes
-Zap Cannon

Blaziken /@Life Orb
Adamant Nature
Ability:Blaze
EVs:252attk/252spd/4hp
-Stone Edge
-EarthQuake
-Agility
-Blaze Kick

Suicune@Leftovers
Abilityressure
Bold Nature
EVs: 252 HP /200 SA /56 Def
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Calm Mind
-Roar

Togekiss @ Metronome
Ability: Serene Grace
Modest Nature
EVs: 252 HP /160 Def /146 SA (Help with Ev)!!!
-Thunder Wave
-Air Slash
-Aura Sphere
-Roost

Garchomp @Choice Band
Ability:Sand Veil
Jolly Nature
EVs: 252attk/252spd/4hp
-Brick Break
-Outrage
-Earthquake
- Crunch

Weezing @ Black Sludge
Bold Nature
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 SpAtkk
- Pain Split
- Will-O-Wisp
- Haze
- Thunderbolt

Ok this is the team i wiped up, please help me because i know there are alot of things that are wrong on my team.
Thank you!!!

 

[MysticKenji]

Typhlosion is best as a lead, just so you know.
Heracross's EV spread is impossible.
Can't T-Tar learn Ice Fang or something...?

 

[Terywj [태리]]

Typhlosion is best as a lead, just so you know.
Heracross's EV spread is impossible.
Can't T-Tar learn Ice Fang or something...?

QFT

Some quick comments:
T-Tar can learn Ice Fang
No WoW on Weez?

 

[mood4food77]

heatran works well, unless this is ingame

then infernape or blaziken work

also for hera, scarf it, much deadlier

i'd replace sludgebomb for flamethrower on weezing, sludgebomb only hits grass for SE, fire hits grass and more for SE

 

[Lit]

ok i will consider that but between infernape ,Typhlosion and blaziken who would be the best choice, as a fire special sweeper?

 

[MysticKenji]

Infernape is a mixed sweeper and is the most usable out of the three.
Typhlosion is second due to bad movepool, but he can special sweep well and mixed sweep decently.
Blaziken should only physical sweep.

 

[Lit]

ok so Typhlosion it is, so is my team overall good now or no?

 

[Lit]

Updated new team, tell me what you think

 

[MysticKenji]

Typhlosion wants HP [Ice] because you have no Dragon counters
Weezing wants Thunderbolt over Sludgebomb
Oh, and maximize Typhlosion's speed.

 

[Lit]

ok i updated everything, and one thing i am kinda second guessing on is heracross. I was looking at both stats, and i came to the conclusion that garchomp can take out a more variety of pokes, would he be better in my team since he also has sand veil to go with sandstream?

 

[ss118]

T-TAR/JOLLY/LEFTIESWhy the random caps?
JOLLY
-Taunt
-DRAGON DANCE
-EARTHQUAKE
-CRUNCHAgain, caps?
252ATK/252SPD/6HP
Fine, but you could move the last 4 EVs into defense.

Heracross/Adamant/CB
Megahorn
Close Combat
Stone Edge
Night Slash
104HP/252ATK/102 SPD
Fine

Skarmory/Impish/Shed Bell
Impish
Roost
Whirlwind
Drill Peck
SPikes
252Hp/252Def/6 Speed
fine

Blissey/Lefeites/Bold
Softboiled
Seismic Toss
Thunderwave
Aromatherapy
evs: 148hp/252def/4spd/104spatk
Dang smogonite: the EV spread comes right from them. I will laugh wehn gengar subs in your face.

Weezing/Black Sludge/Bold
Thunderbolt
Wil o Wisp
Haze
Pain split
252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd
This is fine, too.

Typhlosion @ Choice Scarf
EVs: 100 HP / 158 Spd / 252 SAtk
Nature: Modest
- Eruption
- Focus Blast
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Flamethrower
This is best used as a starter.... it also doesn't work with Tyranitar.

I need my last pokemon but I don’t know who to choose, i was thinking about a pokemon that would provide some fire for my team and i could also use him as a speical sweeper as well, i was thinking about Typhlosion since his SA is pretty high, or sum what high. So what do you think, can you guys can help me out a little?

You obviously didn't think over your team very well.... I see no synergy, you also have 2 weaknesses to water and no resistances. To make things worse, you have no Thunderbolt to take on the already mentioned waters.
This team is very Gyarados weak.
This can be fixed by using Vaporeon in place of Typhlosion, just make sure to give it HP Electric.

 

[Lit]

Well if T-tar and Typhlosion do not work togther i could take out t-tar for som one else, i just really want the Typhlosion in my team thats all, and for the blissey you made it seem like will get ***** by gengar subs, is there somthin i can do to change that? ANd if i take out T-Tar, i would lose a physical sweeper, and i think its always good to have 3 sweepers, 2 walls and one suppport.

 

[Tyrannotaur]

I'll never understand why people insist on using Tyranitar with Non sandstorm Pokémon. Sure Tyranitar is awesome, he's my favorite Pokémon, but just using him because he is strong and not caring while Sandstorm whittles down your team makes no sense to me.

I also dislike when people abuse items. Putting Leftovers on everything is annoying.

Tyranitar is good though. I use a DD-tar with a similar setup and he works fine.

 

[Lit]

So what are you trying to say about the t-tar again?

 

[The9litch]

T-TAR/JOLLY/LEFTIES
JOLLY
-Taunt
-DRAGON DANCE
-EARTHQUAKE
-CRUNCH
252ATK/252SPD/6HP

Jolly > Adamant so you can outspeed Infernapes ans Starmies after 1 DD. also Stone Edge > Earthquake.

Heracross/Adamant/CB
Megahorn
Close Combat
Stone Edge
Night Slash
104HP/252ATK/102 SPD

Why arent you running max speed on Hera? He might need it, plus Pursuit > Night Slash

Skarmory/Impish/Shed Bell
Impish
Roost
Whirlwind
Drill Peck
Spikes
252Hp/252Def/6 Speed

Brave Bird > Drill peck because the extra damage out pays off, plus you can just Roost away the damage.

Blissey/Lefeites/Bold
Softboiled
Seismic Toss
Thunderwave
Aromatherapy
evs: 148hp/252def/4spd/104spatk

WHAT??? you are runing a CMBliss EV spread, you have 104 wasted spa now...if your planning on full support bliss, run 252hp/252def. but beware you will be walled by ghosts, especially Blissey trappers such as mean look + sunstitute Dusknoir.

Weezing/Black Sludge/Bold
Thunderbolt
Wil o Wisp
Haze
Pain split
252 HP / 252 Def / 4 Spd

good

Typhlosion @ Choice Scarf
EVs: 100 HP / 158 Spd / 252 SAtk
Nature: Modest
- Eruption
- Focus Blast
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Flamethrower


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[ss118]

So what are you trying to say about the t-tar again?

what I think he's trying to say is that nothing benefits on your team from the sandstream, and is ,in fact, hindered by it.

 

[Lit]

Ok i understand that now, so i took out t- tar who would be the best poke to replace him on my team?

 

[ss118]

Garchomp would work over it: I would use Chain Chomp, but you don't have to.
If you want a DDer, your lack of Ice weaknesses allows you to use stuff like Salamence and Dragonite, perferably the latter.

 

[Lit]

OK i changed my whole team around what do you guys think?

 

[ss118]

Let's see what you have this time:

Forretress @Leftovers
Ability:Sturdy
Bold Nature
EVs: 252 HP / 176 Def / 40 SpDef
- Rapid Spin
-Stealth Rock
-Toxic Spikes
-Zap Cannon
Fine, I moved the EVs around, you did too much special defense.

Blaziken /@Life Orb/ Expert Belt
Adamant Nature
Ability:Blaze
EVs:252attk/252spd/4hp
-Stone Edge
-Brick Break
-Agility
-Flare Blitz
Your better off with more power since your using Agility. You may want to use Expert Belt because Flare Blitz + Life Orb = X.X

Suicune@Leftovers
Abilityressure
Bold Nature
EVs: 252 HP /200 SA /56 Def
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Calm Mind
-Roar
Maybe use it as a Sleep Talker, you don't have anything to take status. Use Surf, with the other move being Calm Mind, Roar, or Ice Beam.

Togekiss @ Metronome
Ability: Serene Grace
Modest Nature
EVs: 252 HP /160 Def /146 SA (Help with Ev)!!!ok
252 HP, 196 Defense, 28 Speed, 4 Special Attack, 28 Special Defense
-Thunder Wave/ Psycho Shift
-Air Slash
-Aura Sphere/ Nasty Plot
-Roost
If you go with my suggestions, your no longer stopped by Toxic users or Paralyzers such as Blissey and Cresselia, and you easily beat them one-on-one.

Garchomp @Choice Band
Ability:Sand Veil
Jolly Nature
EVs: 252attk/244spd/12sp.atk
-Dragon Claw
-Outrage
-Earthquake
- Fire Blast
You deal more damage and you don't get walled by Skarmory.

Weezing @ Black Sludge
Bold Nature
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 SpAtkk
- Pain Split
- Will-O-Wisp
- Haze
- Thunderbolt
Fine

Ok this is the team i wiped up, please help me because i know there are alot of things that are wrong on my team.
Thank you!!!

lol, I feel like I changed your whole team