take a look at my fox, critique and rate it plz I need help im not a proffessional

[angl_went]

Comment and help me to mastering my fox plz!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7fDxbvMJbHU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PyG5wRUPcOc

help me to mastering my fox plzz

 

[Killer Tree]

Needs more sound.


And cowbell.

 

[SCOTU]

Needs more Frames / Sec as well.

 

[Zephyr]

Needs more upsmash. You can combo fast fallers straight to Hell with it.

 

[Oskurito]

Work on grab combos, if they DI and you know that you wont reach them again for another grab up smash instead. Incorporate the Thunder's combo into your game vs. Falco, that's all I have to say.