Sunrise to Sunset

[WB40]

I'm gonna start off with the prologue.

Sunrise to Sunset​

Prologue​

"Yakimoto?" Queried the nurse. "It's that time again."
"Ah, yes," answered Yakimoto, a frail, old man. He staggered through the halls of the old folks home.
He could hear a chant of, "Yakimoto, Yakimoto," as he entered the story-telling room. Many children were sitting in a group, around 50 of them, watching the door. Claps were booming around the room.
"I am sure most of you know the stories of my adventures as a young man," announces Yakimoto, "as most share my blood-line." 3 quarters of the crowd erupts into cheering. "For those who do not, I will give a brief summary. When I was young, I was a daring ninja, skilled in the art, and quick as lightning. These stories are a compiliation of my adventures, my successes and my fall from fame. Now, I start with my ninja training..."

End of Prologue​

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I will post a new chapter every 1 or 2 days.

 

[WB40]

Sunrise to Sunset​

Chapter 1: Ninja School Awaits​

In the silence of the forest, it would seem all was silent, except for the creaking of trees. However, moving silently, were a group of ninjas, all alike, except for one. The others were dressed in complete black, but one had a blue ninja mask. He rested at the back, not as if he was anxious, but as if he was keeping an eye out for predators. Unliike the others, his blades were already bathed in blood, as if he was a teacher. But he was not. This man was Yakimoto, an already experienced ninja, looking for more silent, more efficient techniques. The others were anxious, as if they had never been a ninja before. And they haven't.

As they exited the forest, they saw other groups, doing the same. They combined into one group as they entered the Ninja School. It was not a school of children, but a school of young men, around 18-21, most wanting to learn the way of the ninja. Only 5, including Yakimoto, were already accomplished ninjas. Yakimoto had learned of the other 4 by the fine, papyrus letter that the school had sent out. He did not know, however, their names. A tall man came out.
"I'm going to be most of your teachers," said the man, "my name is Priccat. All the names I call out are with me." Priccat started to call...

It took 5 minutes for Priccat to call all but 5. "I see you 5 are the ones wanting to learn more advanced techniques," Priccat announced. "Come with me and I will take you to your teacher..."

End of Chapter 1​

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