RMT please

[asob4]

this is my first RMT so if i make a mistake i'm sorry

Ninjask @Leftovers
176 hp/252 atk/80 spd
Hasty
Swords Dance
Baton Pass
Substitute
X-Scissor

Standard baton passer. Helps out some of my sweepers get going. Good lead. X-Scissor for any pesky Weavile or any dark or psychic really

Heatran @Choice Specs
56 hp/252 sp. atk/200 spd
Naive (couldn't get +sp atk nature)
Earth Power
Dragon Pulse
Overheat
Explosion

My special sweeper. With a speed boost or 2 passed to him he's pretty unstoppable, even more so if coming in on a fire move. Explosion for bliss.

Weavile @Focus Sash
40 hp/252 atk/216 spd
Jolly
Swords Dance
Ice Punch
Night Slash
Brick Break/Aerial Ace

Main physical sweeper. Needs no help from Ninjask like my others. Switch Brick Break and Aerial Ace according to my main threat. Infernape or a dark.
I really don't like Infernape.

Breloom @Toxic Orb
44 hp/252 atk/212 spd
Toxic Heal
Adamant
Spore
Substitute
Mach Punch
Focus Punch

My sub puncher/phys sweeper. With speed from Ninjask he's hard to beat. I chose Mach punch over Seed Bomb mainly because i'm not always gonna get speed passed to him, plus a priority move that OHKO's any Weavile is good by me =)

Weezing @Black Sludge
252 hp/252 def/6 sp atk
Impish
Pain Split
Haze
Toxic
Thunderbolt

My physical wall/hazer/toxicer and my only real Gyarados counter. I love him, always have always will. Pain Split to heal and do some damage.

Spiritomb @Leftovers
Careful
252 hp/144 atk/112 sp def
Pain Split
Will-O-Wisp
Pursuit
Sucker Punch

Special wall mostly, wisps physical threats and pursuits runners. Pain Split to heal and Sucker Punch for some decent damage.

Also I have a Donphan and Forretress if i need a spiker/spinner/phazer. I could swap Weezing for either of the two.
That's my team, so rate away. Any help would be nice. Thanks

 

[Terywj [태리]]

this is my first RMT so if i make a mistake i'm sorry

Ninjask @Leftovers
176 hp/252 atk/80 spd
Hasty
Swords Dance
Baton Pass
Substitute
X-Scissor

Standard baton passer. Helps out some of my sweepers get going. Good lead. X-Scissor for any pesky Weavile or any dark or psychic really
Good.

Heatran @Choice Specs
56 hp/252 sp. atk/200 spd
Naive (couldn't get +sp atk nature)
Earth Power
Dragon Pulse
Overheat
Explosion

My special sweeper. With a speed boost or 2 passed to him he's pretty unstoppable, even more so if coming in on a fire move. Explosion for bliss.
Good, max Heatran's Speed

Weavile @Focus Sash
40 hp/252 atk/216 spd
Jolly
Swords Dance
Ice Punch
Night Slash
Brick Break/Aerial Ace

Main physical sweeper. Needs no help from Ninjask like my others. Switch Brick Break and Aerial Ace according to my main threat. Infernape or a dark.
I really don't like Infernape.
I'd ditch Swords Dance for Ice Shard/Aerial Ace and use Choice Band/Scarf.

Breloom @Toxic Orb
44 hp/252 atk/212 spd
Adamant
Spore
Substitute
Seed Bomb
Focus Punch

My sub puncher/phys sweeper. With speed from Ninjask he's hard to beat. I chose Mach punch over Seed Bomb mainly because i'm not always gonna get speed passed to him, plus a priority move that OHKO's any Weavile is good by me =)
See Bomb>Mach Punch so Ghosts don't wall you.

Weezing @Black Sludge
252 hp/252 def/6 sp atk
Impish
Pain Split
Haze
Toxic
Thunderbolt

My physical wall/hazer/toxicer and my only real Gyarados counter. I love him, always have always will. Pain Split to heal and do some damage.
I like Will-o-wisp on Weezing over Toxic...

Spiritomb @Leftovers
Careful
252 hp/144 atk/112 sp def
Pain Split
Will-O-Wisp
Pursuit
Sucker Punch

Special wall mostly, wisps physical threats and pursuits runners. Pain Split to heal and Sucker Punch for some decent damage.
Good.

Also I have a Donphan and Forretress if i need a spiker/spinner/phazer. I could swap Weezing for either of the two.
That's my team, so rate away. Any help would be nice. Thanks

Pretty balanced team.
Maybe after I'm done assembling mine I'll battle ya.
TeryMeter: 7.8/10

 

[asob4]

thanks
@ weezing
i always seem to wisp somthing i don't want to and he already takes all kinds of phys hits no problem lol plus spiritomb is good for wisping
@breloom
yeah i know ghosts kinda wall him bad but i like the priority move since he isn't the fastest and it helps get rid of focus sash users and reversalers

 

[MysticKenji]

Good team.

I personally prefer ScarfVile and BandVile over SashVile, but if it works for you...
I also prefer Seed Bomb over Mach Punch on Breloom.

 

[asob4]

the sash works well, stops anyone who thinks they can kill him in one hit.
i like mach punch though =( lol
if a ghost does come in i'll just spore and switch to an appropiate counter if no other poke is asleep that is

 

[mood4food77]

i'd go protect over x-scissor on ninjask

he's a great prostitute (protect and substitute...hehe)

and no, i didn't come up with that term either

and if a ghost comes in, switch in weavile, they're not going to damage it much (or at all with breloom out, immune to psychic, resists ghost and ice, not many ghosts have a fire move), then pursuit for massive damage

 

[asob4]

but then a lucky taunt owns ninjask lol

 

[mood4food77]

how many pokes run taunt besides gyra and one other poke (who i have seem to forgotten at the moment)

 

[asob4]

well those are just the best lol
i'm sure there's others that might
plus i like an attacking move

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

@breloom
yeah i know ghosts kinda wall him bad but i like the priority move since he isn't the fastest and it helps get rid of focus sash users and reversalers

But shouldn't Spiritomb's Sucker Punch be able to handle them?

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

 

[asob4]

you shush wii4mii

 

[shadydentist]

Focus sash weavile is good for gengars and alakazams who predict well with focus blast. Or for the uncommon focus sash/counter alakazams.

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

you shush wii4mii

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Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

 

[IC3R]

this is my first RMT so if i make a mistake i'm sorry

Well, let's see what you have here...

Ninjask @Leftovers
176 hp/252 atk/80 spd
Hasty
Swords Dance
Baton Pass
Substitute
X-Scissor

Standard baton passer. Helps out some of my sweepers get going. Good lead. X-Scissor for any pesky Weavile or any dark or psychic really

Good; just be careful if Weavile's packing Ice Shard.

Heatran @Choice Specs
56 hp/252 sp. atk/200 spd
Naive (couldn't get +sp atk nature)
Earth Power
Dragon Pulse
Overheat
Explosion

My special sweeper. With a speed boost or 2 passed to him he's pretty unstoppable, even more so if coming in on a fire move. Explosion for bliss.

The Specs kinda ruin the point of the Speed Boosts. They are usually used on Pokes who can cover a large range of types. I'd suggest Flamethrower/Fire Blast instead of Overheat, and you can use Leftovers or Wise Glasses in place of the Choice Specs. But you don't have to if you like switching a lot.

Weavile @Focus Sash
40 hp/252 atk/216 spd
Jolly
Swords Dance
Ice Punch
Night Slash
Brick Break/Aerial Ace

Main physical sweeper. Needs no help from Ninjask like my others. Switch Brick Break and Aerial Ace according to my main threat. Infernape or a dark.
I really don't like Infernape.

If you're running a SashVile with Swords Dance, it should also pack Ice Shard for foes that are Choice Scarfed. Or you can run a Choice Banded Weavile with those four attacking moves (Pursuit over Night Slash though), and this sucker will hit real hard...

Breloom @Toxic Orb
44 hp/252 atk/212 spd
Toxic Heal
Adamant
Spore
Substitute
Mach Punch
Focus Punch

My sub puncher/phys sweeper. With speed from Ninjask he's hard to beat. I chose Mach punch over Seed Bomb mainly because i'm not always gonna get speed passed to him, plus a priority move that OHKO's any Weavile is good by me =)

Seems fine. Since you like Mach Punch, you can throw Focus Punch for Seed Bomb, so you won't be stopped cold by Ghosts.

Weezing @Black Sludge
252 hp/252 def/6 sp atk
Impish
Pain Split
Haze
Toxic
Thunderbolt

My physical wall/hazer/toxicer and my only real Gyarados counter. I love him, always have always will. Pain Split to heal and do some damage.

Good.

Spiritomb @Leftovers
Careful
252 hp/144 atk/112 sp def
Pain Split
Will-O-Wisp
Pursuit
Sucker Punch

Special wall mostly, wisps physical threats and pursuits runners. Pain Split to heal and Sucker Punch for some decent damage.

Good.

Also I have a Donphan and Forretress if i need a spiker/spinner/phazer. I could swap Weezing for either of the two.

Hmm. You can use one of them to guard Ninjask, since it takes 50% damage from Stealth Rock. Maybe Donphan cause it can also Roar; if you're swapping a Hazer, use a pHazer!

That's my team, so rate away. Any help would be nice. Thanks

Not bad at all. I'm curious as to how often it works outside of the game. Watch out for Sub/Curswine, it carries moves that can ruin most of your team pretty easily.

Overall a nice-looking team. I give it:

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An 8.4/10, and a boot to the head.

-IC3R, out...