Rate My Team

[GodzillaSmasher]

RATE IT!!!!(please)

FireRocket(Typhlosion; leader)
Attack: 213
Defence: 193
Sp. Atk: 235
Sp. Def: 196
Speed: 226
Health: 285
Ability: Blaze
Item: Pecha Berry
Nature: Quirky
LV: 92
Moves: Flamethrower, ThunderPunch, Dig, and Flame Wheel

Sparx(Ampharos)
Attack: 204
Defence: 159
Sp. Atk: 222
Sp. Def: 213
Speed: 161
Health: 300
Ability: Static
Item: Quick Claw
Nature: Adamant
LV: 92
Moves: Thunderbolt, Hyper Beam, Focus Punch, Thunder

Lizarang(Charizard)
Attack: 207
Defence: 179
Sp. Atk: 233
Sp. Def: 162
Speed: 242
Health: 260
Ability: Blaze
Item: Charcoal
Nature: Naughty
LV: 89
Moves: Mega Kick, Blast Burn, Flamethrower, Fly

Shadow(Flygon)
Attack: 216
Defence: 198
Sp. Atk: 210
Sp. Def: 182
Speed: 226
Health: 295
Ability: Levitate
Item: Metal Coat
Nature: Modest
LV: 95
Moves: Crunch, Hyper Beam, Iron Tail, Dragonbreath

SteelStone(Steelix)
Attack: 175
Defence: 382
Sp. Atl: 123
Sp. Def: 155
Speed: 88
Health: 255
Ability: Rock Head
Item: EXP Share
Nature: Careful
LV: 85
Moves: Iron Tail, Dragonbreath, Double-Edge, Hyper Beam

DragonStar(Salamence)
Attack: 234
Defence: 166
Sp. Atk: 211
Sp. Def: 179
Speed: 199
Health: 289
Ability: Intimidate
Item: EXP Share
Nature: Calm
LV: 84
Moves: Dragon Claw, Refresh, Flamethrower, Dragonbreath.


So, there it is. Why, you ask? Well, the reason DragonStar and SteelStone are at a lower level than the rest is because they are my newest. Tohe spots did belong to a LV 99 Rayquaza and LV 99 Groudon, but I didn't want legendaries in my REAL team, so, I got a Salamence from my Pokemon XD, and caught and Onix, witch evolved into Steelix. Lizarang was my Charmander from FireRed. FireRocket is from Pokemon Coloseum, as is Shadow and Sparx. I didn't expect to have Sparx on my team, but I needed an electric type to make up for the water weakness that Lizarang and FireRocket had, so, Sparx was the lucky one. FireRocket is considered my 'leader' because Typhlosion is my favorite Pokemon, and because he is my strongest. Not by level, of course. Shadow is the strongest by level, but FireRocket has so many wins, that he is my strongest.

 

[victra♥]

oh boy. Another noob rmt.

Stickies. Have you read 'em?

 

[GodzillaSmasher]

Oops. Sry. I'll edit my first post with more info.

 

[victra♥]

No, you don't understand. You have no EVs spreads, and your natures and attack sets are horrendous. You have some glaring weaknesses, no special wall, a terrible lead and without a rapid spinner, half your team could die from Stealth Rock alone and a Weavile, Starmie as well as a Garchomp will have a fun time out speeding and killing the majority of your team if not you're entire team.

 

[GodzillaSmasher]

Yeah, yeah, I haven't had the Diamond & Pearl experience, ok? So, I haven no idea who Garchomp is, or what the attack Stealth Rock is. Examine it in terms of FireRed and Emerald.

As for your comments, I have no clue as to why Thunder Punch wouldn't be a good attack for FireRocket. Thunder Punch can take care of water types when Sparx is out, and Dig can take care of fire types. Normally, I would take Fire Blast over Flamethrower, but I take PP and accuracy into account. Flamethrower is a great fire attack, and has more PP and accuracy than Fire Blast. FireRocket has Flame Wheel to use incase he gets frozen. I understand what you mean in the Mega Kick on Lizarang, but I needed a physical attack other than fly, and I did have Brick Break, and I might get it back again. Focus Punch has gotten me out of tight places before, and I may get rid of the Hyper Beams on SteelStone and Sparx.

I'm gonna edit my above posts with stats.

 

[MysticKenji]

Add EVs
Add items
That Typholsion set is horrible.
NEVER use Hyper Beam or Blast Burn
Don't use two moves of the same type on one pokemon unless its necessary
Salamence should not Refresh
Get better natures
Starmie murders you

 

[GodzillaSmasher]

I thought Thunder Punch would be good for Typhlosion.

I'll add items, but I'm too lazy to really search for items, so they aren't as good as people would hope.

I really don't understand EVs.

 

[chaos 9]

well first off earthquake>>>>>>.>>>>>>>>>>dig on typlotion. your sets are to mixed on pokes that should not have mixed sets. steelix is a defensive not offensive poke. ampharos is far outclassed by jolteon or even manectric for crying out loud! if you dont get evs just google pokemon evs and it should explain.

 

[GodzillaSmasher]

I understand that SteelStone is my defensive pokemon.

I looked up EVs, and I think I get it. You want the stat that will be raised to most if my pokemon is bested, right?

 

[Terywj [태리]]

Please follow the format...
Name@Item
Nature/Ability
EV's
Attack 1
Attack 2
Attack 3
Attack 4
The pokemon's role.

Stats and levels aren't needed.

Like MysticKenji said, NEVER use Hyper Beam/Elemental Beams.
EQ>Dig on Typhlosion.