plz critique our game

[DarkKyanite]

plz critique our game =P
really needs a lot helps from u guys

DarkKyanite (Falcon) vs Yueie (Doc)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=znrycfhWsk4
DarkKyanite (Falcon) vs Yueie (Doc)2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TBBp4vHxI5A
DarkKyanite (Falcon) vs Yueie (Doc)3
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qxjJsT06QTY



we both suicided many times for some weird reason ><
maybe we were nervous in front of the camera lol
and ty for spending ur time on watching and giving comments
we appreciate it a lot


ps: also sry for the bad quality of the videos

 

[popook88]

Hey, I only watched the first vid and it was hard to make out what exactly happened, but I did notice that the Falcon was really conservative with the edgeguarding, I think a lot can be gained by jumping off the stage backwards with a Bair and using the second jump and up B to get back to the stage. You should try it out.

 

[DarkKyanite]

thx for the comments i'll work on it =)
and i'll also get a new camera ><

 

[Oskurito]

Both of you were pretty good, the tech skill was OK. lol I'm impressed since most of the videos that people post here saying "rate me" or critique my ________ sux.

Decent stuff, the only bad thing was the quality of the vid

-I just watched the 2nd match-