Please help my Falco get better

[D.R-]

My friend and I recorded some matches today and I'm looking for some critique on what I'm doing wrong/what I can do better.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qyczx0plV4g
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RiAKra-a-CY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j7DOXbxzCz0

thanks

 

[Kason Birdman]

pretty good.
not very many obvious mistakes or things i can tell you you need to improve on.
you played the recovery game very well against marth. which is one of the most important things you need to do in that match up.
also covered his options when he was recovering pretty well.
also saw some nice nair shine sheild pressure.

one thing i can say is i did notice a few missed l cancels so possibly brushing up your tech skill could be useful. (did notice that moonwalk though, shout outs to st. marys)

but iv only watched the first match so far... ill watch the rest and if i have anything to add i will.


edit: i was gonna comment on your lack of getting off. but then i watched that second match with that deass combo on PS. good ****.

 

[FoxLisk]

i watched the first game only

you roll kind of a lot, and sometimes you're a little too aggressive. i also didnt really see you landing any big combos, so i'd say work on your combo game. get more off of shines, since they're hard to land. your opponent isn't playing the matchup particularly well, though, so it's hard to advise you in a deep way.

 

[D.R-]

Hmm, I see, that helps a lot. =)

Though, I'm not sure why I don't land many combos. I think I don't actively look to hit them again after I put them in hitstun because I'm a bit scared for some reason. I'll definitely work on it.

 

[FoxLisk]

you're welcome.

tell your marth friend to DD grab and CC grab you more often. it'll teach you not to be so aggressive.

 

[D.R-]

you're welcome.

tell your marth friend to DD grab and CC grab you more often. it'll teach you not to be so aggressive.

Ah I see

Will do