please critique my marf

[FluxWolf]

hey guys, im working on my marth and i normally main fox so maybe some of the habits i have arent very good from marth mains views, so i figured you guys could watch a few matches and give me some advice :D!

the only recent matches i have of my marth are from this set so here it is:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UlFQMhxH2Y4&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ABdJPe6_nzs&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_ZDKFVOzeQ

just a friendly/seriously set. and i guess its just vs falco so anything i could do differently here?

Thanks guys!

 

[Foy]

Nice man-- Less noob stuff, more pro stuff

Edit- This is Jesiah TEG

 

[Piman34]

i liked it, it seems very similar to how i play - one thing is you do a good job with dash dancing and tech chasing, but you also do what i do when the falco shines, you immediately try to shield grab which gets you hit and comboed, so try to either forsee them messing up the cancel of the shine, or wait until the aerial after the shine to grab. now dont do that every time since the falco seems to be able to jc shine grab

good job with creative edge guarding try more nairs they seem to be good platform pressure instead of just up airs from underneath, just my thoughts though

 

[Dart!]

d*** missin alot of edgeguards where you could just fsmash

 

[FluxWolf]

word, simplicity and effectiveness is what im shooting to work on overall