Please critique my gameplay!

[dhif24]

Hi here is a video of me (luigi) playing a buddy (falco). Would really like some feedback on what I can do better. Thanks and please be brutally honest.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1DexHkIIWY8

Video quality is poor so play on full screen to make viewing easier.

 

[dhif24]

bump please

 

[WritersBlah]

If you want critiques on your playstyle, head on over to your respective character board's (in your case, Luigi's) video thread. The competitive thread is only for competitive topics not dealing with specific characters, which belong in character boards.