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Nintendo War!

AQT

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Joined
Jul 1, 2008
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Just a story I'm writing will post new chaptar each day!

Chapter One-The Shadow Realm

It was a sunny happy day a delfino plaza. It was Delfino day where they had a big parade and drank as much mushroom juice as possible. Everyone was dancing to folk music. Mario was dancing with peach.
"Oh Mario this day couldn't get any better!" She said holding round Mario's shoulder.
Then suddenly the sun had disapeared and the sky's became black. The music stopped. Everyone looked at the sky. Mario looked at sky there was a picture of Bowser. "Could it be.." He said Looking shocked. "Mario, Mario!" Link and Sonic ran as fast as they could to him. "How is this possible?!" Said Samus who just came. "I don't know.." said Mario. Peach was staring at him. "Whats Going on?!" She said angrily. "A few years ago bowser and some friends, shadow, Ganondauf, Wario, Waluigi, Metakinght, mewtwo, Fox, Marth and some others made a group and tried to kill us. Then we made a group against them and sent them to a shadow Realm but somehow there back..." Said Mario angrily
"And Also bowsers ment to be dead..." Said Lugi looking up towards the sky.

The party finished everyone want to there homes and refused to come out till the sign in the sky had gone and it would be safe.
"Zelda, Daisy, Kirby Pikachu!" Said Mario running to them through the rain. "It's not safe to be out come instide!" They all looked at each other and followed mario inside the house. The house was massive with more then 5 floors. Everyone lived there.
"Whats Wrong?!" Said Daisy puzzled
"YEAH Wats wrong!" Said Kirby angrily who as injoying the rain.
"They back!" Said Mario "and they want revenge!" Kirby looked terified and so did Daisy. Zelda walked off towards Link.
 

Amide

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