Nessy's Olimar Vids, Improve How?

[NessySmashBros]

I had some fights on brawl against my friends the other day and i recorded some. I wanna know what you think and what I can do improve.

Nessy(Olimar) Vs Harvs(Lucas) 1
Nessy(Olimar) Vs Harvs(Lucas) 2
Nessy(Olimar) Vs Scott(ZSS)
Nessy(Olimar) Vs Scott(Ike)
I will upload more but this is the only one thats uploaded.

 

[DanGR]

pretty good, got any of you losing a life so i can critique it? I can't really say anything bad you did without you dying...

 

[NessySmashBros]

Ok I still need to upload the one where I loose Stock(S)

 

[NessySmashBros]

New vid is up. Also I want to point out that my controller didn't work for the first 1 min or so. I could not Right Dash

 

[Bluebottel]

Playing versus a Ness/Lucas?

1. Get not-all-that-close but at grab range.
2. Press Z.
3. ???
4. Profit!

Really, abuse that you get a free whack at both of them after they struggle free from your constant grab pummeling.

I think ill name it 'Trv-S z cancel pivot degrab Bluebottel semithrow tech'.

 

[NessySmashBros]

Cool thanks. I try not to get close but he has stupid range attacks like PK Fire and thunder and Freezw.

Two New Vids.

 

[WhoseReality?]

i recommend you get a new controller

 

[NessySmashBros]

Yes I need one, when I tilt left it keeps going left until I dash left of go right. I've had three controllers that have messed up now.

 

[WhoseReality?]

ok now I actually watched the videos. there weren't many "mistakes" since you won so easily, but in the ZSS match, you didn't even whistle when you were knocked off with two pikmin in tow and four scattered around the stage. That says to me that if anyone was able to put any real pressure on you then you would be toast as soon as they got you off the stage.

But, really, you learn from your losses. Find someone to play against who will still beat you even when you are busting your @$$ as hard as you can. Then you'll be able to see where and how they are handing it to you. Post those videos and we can give you suggestions.

 

[NessySmashBros]

Well I haven't got any vids of me loosing because I didn't loose so I can't upload them. But when I do I will upload them.

Thanks for the advice, I always forget 1 or 2 moves that a character has. With Olimar I think I need to whistle and keep control of my pikmin and Up B a bit more.