My poem

[Tongji]

This poem is about an unknown classmate of mine enjoy!

The Poem
Classmate of mine in expository writing.
I didn’t know you that well
Until I saw your art, which is dazzling
I saw you biting, that big yellow pencil.
Drawing with concentration line after line
Trying to perfectly draw that perfect, circle stencil.
You are a companion of mine in school,
Noticing you in two classes
When I am awake, and not about to drool.
We have had our good times together
Like that one time you lent me that yellow yarn spool.
That was a special day in Art class
Because I turned my project in on time, and didn’t have to stay after school
So in writing I thank you
For giving me an A on that last assignment
Hopefully you do not die of the school gruel
And I will live another day to see you in class.

 

[Zook]

I don't know exactly what it is about. Anyway's, it's nothing really special. Is this your first....?

If it's about someone you like, don't give it to them, it's not very good or flattering.

If it's about a friend, show them. They'll think you're bad at writing and laugh.

 

[Tongji]

ya it's a school project. I hate writing poetry and no it's not about anyone I like lolz anyway thanks for your comments and constructive crtisisms