My Fox, Critique/whatever please <3

[Strong Badam]

my fox is bad
make it better

vs. peach:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6qc_EW_-90
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZHZHWD6YCQ

vs. falco:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uw_drtbVLvo
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8w3B5dzRyOc


vs. falcon:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y632AajG6pE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EqE2LFLR4-M


i think i grab a lot
& my edgeguarding could be better
my tech skill is good tho imo

 

[unknown522]

I watched the first match so far and I don't have much to say yet. When you improve your tech skill, your general skill will go up a lot.

will add more after watching the other matches.

Edit:
- You and your friend mess up a lot of technical stuff.

- You should punish more with up-smash if it will kill, instead of going for a combo most of the time.

- You shouldn't throw out random moves at random times, it will get you punished.

- Grab more.

- Less sidestep, especially vs peach.

- rolling away is usually better than doing a sidestep. You can also shine out of shield.

- combo more and SHFFL more n-air.

 

[Strong Badam]

thanks for the critique unknown. i'll try to implement some of this into my game and then get some more vids up.
anyone else have anything else to add?

 

[`DNS`]

- You shouldn't throw out random moves at random times, it will get you punished.

3:30 on the first match vs falco, you started charging a fsmash on a platform lol

 

[Strong Badam]

that's just cuz im cool like that. lmao

 

[unknown522]

^ I'm assuming it was a mistake.

 

[Toobz]

Wavedash. Its really good to just freak out with fox all the time. Stop walking around so much.

Really you just want to confuse your opponent and bait him into leaving himself open. Wavedashing/dashdancing combined makes you really mobile hard to hit. Against Falco, try some thunders combos. But really I would just work on your movement, and messing up less. Wavelanding is also very good to mix into your movement. Missed JCed grabs hurt really bad. You have a good idea of how to play fox, but the main thing I think you need to improve is your movement. Become as fluid as possible. Combos will just start to happen after you get that down.