loook! My kirby in a tourney (vids)

[HaPPyTheCoW]

critiques?? please! :] i want to improve my kirby!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQVfOXBni7s < rd 1, the camera is far at first but it gets zoomed in later in the vid.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oz-fgftArKo < rd 2

^ vs pikachu

i have 2 more but brawl matches are boring. they are in my channel though.

o ya, the fthrow to fair are all accidents, i meant to uair but i didnt use the cstick for aerials until very recently.

 

[Tomato Kirby]

I think you have a good Kirby. Not the best, but definitely not the worst. I like it!

Anyway, nobody has the perfect Kirby, so now I comment. (I only got to watch the vs. Pikachu fight, sorry).

1. Pummel at low-percent grabs (that Pikachu had 0% and you still tried to attack) does not work too well.
2. I noticed a lot of rolling when not needed. Try using pivot or dash-dancing.
3. D-air is a good move, although you got punished sometimes. Try to get behind the opponent for a u-tilt.
4. Gonzo combo only works at low, low percents. I would do u-throw at higher percent and attempt to juggle.

I do like how you have empty jumps (to air dodge) as a potential fake-out and maybe a possible mindgame. I also liked your use of aerials and aerial move DI. Stone usage was wonderful (punishing u-smash).

Just drop a couple of bad habits, and that Kirby is definitely going to see improvement.