Looking for some input and/or constructive criticism on my commentary!

[CaptainVul]

I've made a topic like this a little while ago so this is pretty much a follow up topic so you can see my progress or if you never saw the first topic you could share your first impressions. I started doing commentary sort of recently for my scene and I've somewhat become one of the main guys now, but I'm still pretty new to this commentary business so I'm definitely still trying to improve so I appreciate any input.

Heres some pretty recent examples from the past couple of weeks of my commentary from a weekly held in Chicago every Sunday on twitch.tv/unrivaledtournaments

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kr9MvqLhk9o
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cC0h6bzqe2E
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P7-m0Nd48XM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lBPjPxeygtU
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LqXtL6rZtBI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0m5yLz1MLZs

I'm TECHNIQUE!!!