J-man Returns with an Appology, and a NEW OU team to be rated!*updated

[J-man24star]

yes, First off, i'd like to appologize for being a selfish butthole back when i was trying to make a team... i was in the wrong and was acting like a stuckup jerk who couldn't take the heat...

well aside from that, i dived deeper into the competitive universe and came up with this OU team (i'm quite surprised at the pokemon that are in OU like Roserade)

anyways, i shall list my team in order of one strategy that i came up with, which starts out with-

Roserade@Focus Sash
Timid
Natural Cure
6HP
252 SPa
252 Speed

Sleep Powder
Toxic Spikes
Leaf Storm
HP Fire (i don't know if i can get it though)

Roserade will either outspeed my opponents lead or Put it to sleep, then lay down two layers of toxic spikes, which is pretty much what i think i can muster from her... after this, i switch to-

Blissey@Lefties Calm
6HP/ 252 Def/ 252 SpA

Calm Mind
Ice Beam
Flamethrower
Soft Boiled

I will wall with blissey till i can't wall no more! the idea with her is to wear down the opponent, and if the spikes were rapid Spunned, i paralyze the whole team in

Gliscor@Lefties Impish
252 HP/ 6 atk/ 252 Def
Sand Veil
EQ
Roost
Aerial Ace
Knockoff

Gliscor is my technician who fixes my "electricity problems" he'll either scare off electric types or kill them, either way, i win (most of da time.)

Togekiss@lefties Calm
252 HP/ 64 SpD/ 192 Speed
Serene Grace

Nasty Plot
Air Slash
Baton Pass
Roost

Togekiss works in unison with my Special Sweeper, setting up with Nasty plot till it can't no more, i BP to...

Gengar@Wide Lens Timid
252 SpA/ 252 Spe/ 6 HP

Hypnosis
Shadow Ball
Thunder Bolt
Focus Blast

Gengar Sweeps till its worth! thunderbolt scares off Water and flying types, focus blast is to OHKO Weavile and other... Shadow Ball for STAB!


Gyrados@Life Orb Adamant
72 HP/252 Atk/ 184 Spe

Dragon Dance
Waterfall
EQ
Stone Edge

AND... Gyrados finishes off the opponent with a DD sweep
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I SOLEMLY SWEAR TO TAKE CRITISISM LIKE A MAN!!!!

if not, may i be kicked out of the city, spat on, and hit by a rock.

 

[RedPeppers]

HAHAHA!!!!!!! I saw you post somewhere else, and I was gonna start flaming again.

 

[ss118]

Flamethrower should go with Toxic and Thunder Wave should go with Ice Beam. It helps to take care of the majority of pokemon that like to come in on you. I guess yours makes decent Heracross bait, which your team has a major problem with, but it's going to come in poisoned by Toxic Spikes anyway.

About the team, I see it as too slow. Assuming your opponent attacks your roserade starter, you have no reliable way to take down scarfed pokemon. This is especially problematic if you include the popularity of Stealth Rock that makes it even more of a dangerous ball-game.

First thing I would fix is Blissey. In the case of your team, the Paralysis support isn't great, but I think a Calm Minding set would serve well for you. Preferably with Ice Beam and Flamethrower as the two attacking moves. Thunderbolt could be of considerate if your paranoid of Gyarados, but your own Gyarados should help for against that if you give it stone edge.

There's a lot to be improved upon this team, but at least I see your willing to take advice now. =]

 

[J-man24star]

Flamethrower should go with Toxic and Thunder Wave should go with Ice Beam. It helps to take care of the majority of pokemon that like to come in on you. I guess yours makes decent Heracross bait, which your team has a major problem with, but it's going to come in poisoned by Toxic Spikes anyway.

About the team, I see it as too slow. Assuming your opponent attacks your roserade starter, you have no reliable way to take down scarfed pokemon. This is especially problematic if you include the popularity of Stealth Rock that makes it even more of a dangerous ball-game.

First thing I would fix is Blissey. In the case of your team, the Paralysis support isn't great, but I think a Calm Minding set would serve well for you. Preferably with Ice Beam and Flamethrower as the two attacking moves. Thunderbolt could be of considerate if your paranoid of Gyarados, but your own Gyarados should help for against that if you give it stone edge.

There's a lot to be improved upon this team, but at least I see your willing to take advice now. =]

i understand that fully that my team is slow... thats why i picked defensive slow pokemon... hmm, so that DOES cause problems... i haven't tried this team out on Shoddy, but i'll try and see, hopefully it does better than my crap teams

 

[J-man24star]

How do you change Titles for threads?

team adjusted.

 

[RedPeppers]

Pretty sure there should be an edit button on the bottom right side of the original post. After you hit edit, you should have the little box with Title's name near appear the top of the page. You can edit it there. Don't make many threads at all myself, hope my memory serves you well.

 

[0RLY]

Oh crap it's J-man! Run for your liiives! D:


Juuust kidding...


...anyways, your team functions very similarly to Tery's team. Maybe you can take a look at his team and my post there to get some ideas.