Ive been doing a lot of commentary recently for Smash in my local scene, looking for critique/input!

[CaptainVul]

Any input welcome, speak your mind I appreciate it.

I made a similar topic to this about 2 months ago when I first started doing commentary so this is kind of a follow up topic to see if I'm getting any better or if I'm still doing good.

Here are a few recent examples (I'm Technique):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j4wlCjWZtUg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NA4zdIhbF3o
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gx8BN5xbl9M
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AP5gea-bug
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U2mtQ1Pp150

 

[Jaketto]

Any input welcome, speak your mind I appreciate it.

I made a similar topic to this about 2 months ago when I first started doing commentary so this is kind of a follow up topic to see if I'm getting any better or if I'm still doing good.

Here are a few recent examples (I'm Technique):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j4wlCjWZtUg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NA4zdIhbF3o
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gx8BN5xbl9M
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0AP5gea-bug
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U2mtQ1Pp150

Hi dude,
To be honest this was a lot more professional then I thought it would be! I personally think you did a great job!!! The only thing I could say is speak a tiny bit more (even if you didn't it would still be almost perfect)

For someone that is new to commentating I feel you did great.

 

[CaptainVul]

Hi dude,
To be honest this was a lot more professional then I thought it would be! I personally think you did a great job!!! The only thing I could say is speak a tiny bit more (even if you didn't it would still be almost perfect)

For someone that is new to commentating I feel you did great.

Haha thanks man I appreciate the input especially the professional part, I want to be the type of color commentator type but I do definitely want to keep it professional.

And yeah sometimes I probably do need to talk more but I guess I find myself thinking about the match going on and what each player is doing but I guess it wouldn't hurt to just throw out how I feel about whats going on in the match as it happens even if its nothing spectacular happening or anything.

But yeah thanks again!