I'm a noob, Rate my team

[shadydentist]

eh, heres my first attempt at a team

Milotic @ leftovers
Modest
252 d 84 hp 106 sa 68 sd
Ice Beam
Surf
Toxic
Recover

-special wall, sweeperish


Weavile @ choice band
Jolly
252 sp 252 a 6 hp
Night Slash
Ice Punch
Pursuit
Brick Break

-for dragons and psychics.


Garchomp @ draco plate
Adamant
252 sp 252 a 6 hp
Swords Dance
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Brick Break

Physical sweeper

Skarmory @ shed shell
Impish
252 hp 64 a 192 def
Roost
Spikes
Whirlwind
Drill Peck

-physical wall, spiker

Spiritomb @ leftovers
Modest
200 def, 200 sd, 110 sa
Nasty Plot
Dark Pulse
Psychic
Water Pulse

-Sort of a general-purpose wall. I wish Spiritomb had a better move pool.

Tangrowth @ leftovers
Impish
252 hp 228 def 28 sp
Power Whip
Knock Off
Leech Seed
Sleep Powder
-Standard tangrowth.

Altogether my team resists all 14 types, shared weaknesses are fire (weavile, skarmory, and Tangrowth) covered by Garchomp and Milotic, Bug (tangrowth and Weavile) covered by Skarmory, Ice (tangrowth and Garchomp) covered by Weavile and Milotic, and Electric (Skarmory and Milotic) covered by Garchomp and Tangrowth.

Possible issues: No haze. I'll have to depend on roar, sleep, toxic, etc. to encourage my opponent to switch.

So... any suggestions?

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

Spiritomb learns Water Pulse?

O_o

For Garchomp, but Fire fang over Brick Break.

There are 17 types, not 14.

Otherwise, good.

8/10

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99

 

[9Kplus1]

eh, heres my first attempt at a team

Milotic @ leftovers
Modest
252 d 84 hp 106 sa 68 sd
Ice Beam
Surf
Toxic
Recover

-special wall, sweeperish

I'd really donate some of those defense EVs to spattack if you want it to be a sweeper and donate some HP Evs to spdefense if you want it to be a special wall and take away Toxic for Substitute. Other than that, a 7/10 pokemon.

Weavile @ choice band
Jolly
252 sp 252 a 6 hp
Night Slash
Ice Punch
Pursuit
Brick Break

-for dragons and psychics.

Geeze, everyone has a Weavile... it makes me me feel unoriginal... , If you want it to be a Pursuiter, take off the Choice Band and give it a Muscle Band, Pursuit would be useless if you always stick to one attack. Other than that, a 9/10 pokemon.
Garchomp @ draco plate
Adamant
252 sp 252 a 6 hp
Swords Dance
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Brick Break

Physical sweeper

No plates, give it a Yache Berry or a Focus Sash. Other than that, a 9.5/10 pokemon.

Skarmory @ shed shell
Impish
252 hp 64 a 192 def
Roost
Spikes
Whirlwind
Drill Peck

-physical wall, spiker

Good, a 10/10 wall.

Spiritomb @ leftovers
Modest
200 def, 200 sd, 110 sa
Nasty Plot
Dark Pulse
Psychic
Water Pulse

-Sort of a general-purpose wall. I wish Spiritomb had a better move pool.

Why did I give Skarmory a 10/10? Because Spirittomb back it up, take those speed EVs away for special attack EVs. Other Than That, a 9/10.

Tangrowth @ leftovers
Impish
252 hp 228 def 28 sp
Power Whip
Knock Off
Leech Seed
Sleep Powder
-Standard tangrowth.

Good, 8/10.


Altogether my team resists all 14 types, shared weaknesses are fire (weavile, skarmory, and Tangrowth) covered by Garchomp and Milotic, Bug (tangrowth and Weavile) covered by Skarmory, Ice (tangrowth and Garchomp) covered by Weavile and Milotic, and Electric (Skarmory and Milotic) covered by Garchomp and Tangrowth.

Possible issues: No haze. I'll have to depend on roar, sleep, toxic, etc. to encourage my opponent to switch.

So... any suggestions?

There are 17, not 14 types. Overall, a 9.5/10 team, pat yourself on the back, good team.

Until Next Time, CYA!!!
Celebi...

 

[Wii4Mii 99]

@ Celebi

Since when did you start typing, "Until next time,"?

Am I starting a trend or something?

Until wii meet again,
Wii4Mii 99