I need Some advice for my combo video.

[XxBlazingSpeedxX]

I made a sample combo video and i is my first one to ever make and no it is not the final version of it. I didnt feel like cutting it so i left the snake part in there. So, can you guys give me some tips on it and tell me what i could do better. (Mostly the video not how i play)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F2K0OJEyTyE
(Ill fix the sound it was jacked up)

 

[XxBlazingSpeedxX]

any advice would be helpful
(bump)

 

[SarahHarp]

It was alright.
In any "combo video", I try to look for a good implementation of ftilt because so few videos have it.
Also, dair is pretty exciting for newbies to see, but for most Samus mains this move is her staple move consequently resulting in regular dairs having less of an appeal to see over and over. However when there's an awesome setup involved, then it's great (sort of like that Rohins thing posted recently). Which brings me to my next point:

There was nothing wrong with this video, I just feel that it leans more on the gamplay showcasing side rather than the "combo-ing" side, so to speak. There were a few good combos but otherwise it seemed mostly like watching a vs match. (which is not necessarily a bad thing).

Finally, I hate Snake. He takes so long to kill without gimping

 

[Mars-]

Who are you?

 

[FuLLBLeeD]

Who are you?

Yea man, who are you to dish out constructive criticism. This is Mars's turf, *****.

 

[Mars-]

Yea man, who are you to dish out constructive criticism. This is Mars's turf, BITCH.

Damn right.