Help with my Peach

[~S@G3~]

Hey This is the first of my videos i have posted.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=83qZLLCQZ1s
What do i need to do better.

 

[Sh0ckwave]

You're shield grabbing way too much. You've got a habit of attacking everytime you get up. You don't float cancel enough. You're missing free jump to neutral opportunities when Falco's tumbling in the air right in front of you. Work on your edgeguarding -- instead of dair and nair, use dsmash or bair instead.

Don't dash attack so much. If you do, the opponent will eventually realize it and start shield grabbing it.

Always try to follow up turnips with float cancelling instead of just throwing them.

 

[Bergoth]

There were a few times I noticed when the falco was on a platform above you and you tried to hit him from the ground, but a rising n-air would have been a better choice. Floating out of shield is a good alternative to shield grabbing and I think you could use b-air more, especially for edge-guarding.

I hope these comments are helpful

 

[~S@G3~]

Thanks for the help ill have some more videos latter