Suprised I just now saw this thread... these are the types of threads I try to never let get ignored. New layout of this site blows.
notes I took while stoned watching this:
spamming jab instead of waiting for falco's approach... left wide open
switch up ledge options
learn to ledgedash
work on spacing aerials
grab more (not a lot more, but a little bit more)
work on punishments out of grabs
practice dashing out of l-cancel frame perfectly
lol @ 5:25-5:30
Tell him:
Be extra careful going offstage for edgeguards. Dropzone aerials are great and have their place, but don't forget about the risk. You can edgeguard falco completely without dropzone aerials, however, there are certainly situations where they are the best choice.
His spacing and DI need some work too, especially DI'ing the shine and general combo DI. He should post in here if he has questions.
Decent platform work, I can tell he's been practicing. Good stuff there.