to the fox: make sure you jc the shines. also, i saw you wavedashing so you should waveshine a lot more (esp. on stages w/o platforms). I saw you using a lot of dash attacks-- there are better moves to do while running. ex: do some dash cancels into smash attacks or tilts. you need to grab more, substitute some jc'ed grabs for the dash attacks. Fox can chain grab Falco. shine a lot more, particularly at lower %'s--there were many times you were right beside him and you tried to smash him when he didn't have high enough damage to generate much knockback.
to the Falco: those were platform stages so jc'ed shines were preferrable, but make sure you can waveshine. Watch the lasers when Fox is way off the stage; you nearly let him get back on once by hitting him when he was off the screen.
edit: both of you need to sweetspot the ledges more.
good luck.
@oskurito: good advice, you really helped him out-- seriously though, don't be a dbag.