Fox Ditto Matchup Analysis Please?

[mrevan387]

Hello, first off i am the green fox, player 1 in the VOD.
I was wondering if i could get a match up analysis on some fox dittos in order to find ways to improve. There are 7 matches in this VOD, so that you can see how I play, and what errors i am making constantly, or just areas i can improve on.

ww w.twitch.tv/mrevan387/c/6483393 (I am not allowed to post links yet, so you just have to delete the space between the w's when copying it)

I'm player 1, the green fox, and below is the time where each match starts. One issue i think i can see is my grabs (and sometimes other moves) being spot-dodged, but i don't know what i can do to fix it, you can see in every game.

Match 1: 00:05 (Dream Land)
Match 2: 03:14 (Yoshi's Story)
Match 3: 06:06 (Dream Land)
Match 4: 09:59 (Pokemon Stadium)
Match 5: 12:42 (Fountain of Dreams)
Match 6: 15:14 (Yoshi's Story)
Match 7: 18:29 (Final Destination)

Thankyou

 

[Varist]

youre panic rolling too much
mistiming your edgeguards
spamming grab and misspacing it
missing all your moves
you arent comboing
you sh nair all the time
youre sh nairing into a shield and not shining and your friend is bad enough that hes not punishing it
i would assume your di sucks too but i can't tell because the video keeps skipping and it's not like either of you are getting more than a couple hits
youre missing all your moves
youre mistiming everything

focus on learning to extend your combos
play the game longer to get a better sense of timing
you have no neutral game whatsoever

thats just what i noticed i only watched 2 stocks others probably have more to say

 

[RazeriaN]

Try to shine after the nairs.
Dash dance is good
edge guarding is your main problem tbh, my fox vs fox is trash and my fox is trash as well but thats just common sense.