First Super Smash Bros. For Glory Montage Slamma Jamma

[TestyCoals]

This is the first montage I made not so long ago, would love to get some feedback on it and I really love the song!

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[Smudges]

Nice job. Since it's a funny montage, I'm not going to critique your actual play, because it's supposed to be disrespectful.

It's very funny. I like the captions, and other edits/stuff. Only complaints are that the music is a bit loud, and that there's not nearly enough disrespect at 0:10. Shoulda spiked, or footstooled.

 

[TestyCoals]

Nice job. Since it's a funny montage, I'm not going to critique your actual play, because it's supposed to be disrespectful.

It's very funny. I like the captions, and other edits/stuff. Only complaints are that the music is a bit loud, and that there's not nearly enough disrespect at 0:10. Shoulda spiked, or footstooled.

Thank you! I'm really working hard on my plays and I agree; the music was way too loud. I'm just learning how to use my editing software again so I'm super rusty, lost a lot of the replays I wanted to use through the patches as well; I had no idea I wouldn't be able to view them again so I missed on a lot to record. I made due with what I had, but I will make sure to be more disrespectful! I really appreciate your critique.