Critiqueing greatly needed NEW VIDEOS ADDED IN LAST POST!

[stabbedbyahippie]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NNdSIZoiSO8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qPtgg6R1ab4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVdq8un29jw

I know my Falco is pretty bad but I'm determined to get better so some tips would be greatly appreciated.

By the way, I can't record audio if you're wondering why I don't have the original audio.

Latest post has the new vids in it!

 

[Tyser]

I dont wanna copy and paste those links. I just wanna click on them. You should fix this ASAP.

 

[stabbedbyahippie]

Woah oops, one sec.

Ok the links are fixed.

 

[lordoftheasians]

Learn a new way to get back from ledge (LHDL, wavedash on, etc). Your jump -> phantasm is way too predictable. 3:19-3:27 second video. Seriously.. what happened there?

Incorporate more wavedashing into your gameplay. More shine, too. Don't d-throw to shine. It doesn't work too well.

Fast fall your lasers. They look slow especially your reverse ones.

 

[DtJ Jungle]

your lasers are REALLY slow, shl needs to be fast fallen to be more ffective

dont just dair full hop dair, sh dair...shffl a dair into a shine or something. dair is a predictable approach too, and if you do it too early it can be shield grabbed.

some approaches are shl'ing into a grab, nair, dair or shine. after a nair or dair l cancel intoa shine.

WAVESHINE son! its so much fun.

dthrow shine wont work against good players. i onyl use dthrow situationally to throw off players (dthrow jab regrab uthrow LOL) (if they dont tehc or DI behind me

Falco should be played aggresivelly and you need to work on yoru movement, just walking around isnt good. or standing behind the marth and shielding like you did several times is also stupid. pick and choose your times to shield.

i dunno....any questions im me its on my profile page

 

[stabbedbyahippie]

Bunch fo new vids!

Well I've been playing more people to get better and kept what you guys said in mind.

So after a month of practice I recorded a bunch of new vids and would like some more critiqueing.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjZptgSmYqc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B3ki-l_3Vu0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BmmpT77jL-k
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iB96gFECP_I
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8Z2wRYInAU
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sFQaZbXHSAA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irrwmdgZDts
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oM7IbbsWUSg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cUkbKSicRd4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBpXFE_iEUs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S1_yfgNCTiw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXWksYD18fQ

 

[Adi]

Not bad you're getting better, the main thing you need to work on is your technical consistency. Once you get that to the point you don't really have to think about it you can start working on your mindgames.