Critique please

[stealth3654]

I didn't see a place for critiques, so I just made a new thread.

I'm still new to Mario, so I mess up quite a few times. Please critique:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2E_FuHzH2Xo
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HroUZ1S9Owk&feature=related

Thanks .

 

[CallofMario]

Is it your first time?

If it is nice ^^

I can do much better though, esspecially in Melee where I can wavedash lolz

 

[stealth3654]

I played Mario a few times a week ago, but now I want to get good with Mario. He is so fun .

 

[Kanzaki]

All I can pretty much say is more jabs... it can lead to another jab! :D

or possibly a down smash or a grab.... </mindgames>

Angle your forward smashes upwards, more knockback = kills faster! :D

Space more with bair?

Giving the two opponents you faught, I'd say having a charged fludd wouldn't hurt as well... atleast if you're not doing anything, spam fire ball or charge fludd...

 

[Mario_ 101]

moar up airs.. and mix up your ledge game

 

[SkylerOcon]

Video thread.