Critique our matches! Funny stuff, ****, etc inside!

[Smoke and smash]

Ok, so I have been improving slowly over the weeks. I would like to continue this progress, so I can eventually catch up to the metagame.

Here's a couple matches to watch and give feedback on.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DpsxHw1cTs4&feature=related

I get a **** win here. First 20 seconds we were having some fun.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Yu460r2X-E&feature=related

I start off with some **** combos, but I pull off some pro sd's and lose the match horribly.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IwA1adV78Lo&feature=related

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FgSEnRN5Dxc


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mXIwosuHYj0&feature=related

I get edge guard ***** at the end of this last one for like 4 hours. He straight up embarressed me.

Btw, h3ad doesn't post on the boards but he's a beastly player. He beat scar in a tourney game one time lols at our second tourney, was pretty close to putting scar in losers actually.
My fox is my current project, as I continuously switch mains. I may or may not make him my stable main.
So yeah, we would both love feedback...and yes I know I need to stop sding.

 

[INSANE CARZY GUY]

Always JC grab I saw you didn't in the 2nd marth match, it gives you more range and less lag.

How come they cheered for marth while he lost 2 stocks in a row?

Really your much likly better than me fox wise. But I like to watch one person the whole fight and try to predict what their going to do and If I was the other how should I react

 

[Smoke and smash]

I already analyzed my fox and realized how to become worlds better (besides the fact I was throwing stocks away and edge guarding like a noob). I know about the jc grab...it's not a habit I strongly developed since I am used to grabbing out of wavedashes. I rarely jc grab from shines, but I willl definitly make that a habit as well ( is good to do when I do nair shine combos too slowly and the marth gets a chance to shield).

I also realized during these matches I forgot all about the waveshine grab. Lol, silly me.

 

[INSANE CARZY GUY]

Yeah I knew you understood the silly mistakes on the edge but yeah JC grabing is really good but what's funny is I don't use it for ice climber when they run, I forget a lot for them and I don't SH with the X,Y or stick for bowser. I have wield habits when I smash

 

[h3aderon]

your edge game needs defensive improvement as well as offensive.

 

[battousai555]

Always JC grab I saw you didn't in the 2nd marth match, it gives you more range and less lag.

I'm pretty sure that JC grabs give you less range.