Critique My Marth!

[Ballin]

Hi guys, I'm sort of new to competitive smash. I started less than a year ago and so did my friend (the gay sheik player).

I recorded myself and my friend playing and was hoping that I could get some feedback on my playing.
One thing i notice about myself is that I don't dash dance enough and my movement is not very fluid and controlled. Also, I don't really know how to combo and set up for spikes with Marth.

Also, if you like, give some feedback on the sheik's playing. My friend is gonna read this too.

Thanks, I look forward to your comments!



Srry for the crappy video quality, I recorded this using the webcam on my macbook. Where do i get actual an actual recording device?


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nl1jjhcqtbk (ignore the first match, i wasn't playing serious)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5QN1LMhRsGs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ITj7xXy_Mo
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JKeMgyQeW60

 

[AceDudeyeah]

why are your vids' visuals backwards??
lil' hurtful on the retinas

also, some of your vids stop loading/playing.
like the last vid, at :22

 

[P. O. F.]

Stickys are stickys for a reason sir.

Post this where it belongs. I know you can do it! :-)