Critique My Marth

[gagagoogoololo]

I know I am pretty bad, but I want to hear what you guys think. I have been playing for a few months, and I have improved a lot. Here is the video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5QibzRnLW0M
What do you think?

 

[gagagoogoololo]

Has anyone read this?

 

[Rex+]

You use your Up Smash when he's not even above you. Godly Marth players usually don't use that smash.

Try L-canceling more of your moves. He usually countered you while you were vulnerable.

There's not much more that I can infer from your Marth; you opponent was a horrid Fox player. No edgeguarding? He was quite predictable.

 

[gagagoogoololo]

I still have trouble hitting the up-tilt, since I just started using it. Hopefully I can fix that sometime soon. Thanks for the help, I will remember that.

 

[Cactuar]

Godly Marth players usually don't use that smash.

Uh. This statement is false.

Edit: @Gaga: You need to learn advanced techniques. You should watch some vids of high level players to see the difference in movement. Gaining familiarity with your character's movement is a priority.

 

[gagagoogoololo]

Thanks for the advice! I will try to remember that.