Critique my Marth Please

[Gian]

well its been a while since i asked to rate my Marth lets see if i improved, all constructive criticism is welcome.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BYG_vRvPfYs


http://youtube.com/watch?v=DzPNVmUOBLs

i hardly ever loose against this falco but he uploaded this one^^

http://youtube.com/watch?v=zIcrLZWsxes

tnks for all comments, ill post alot more on like 2 weaks but i cant w8 so i post this 3.

Note: my most recent game is ths first video, i mea thats how i play at the moment

 

[thebluedeath1000]

I watched the first video.

The first stock: you had a decent standard approach, good spacing and were smart about grabbing, just inaccurate..and managed to get the ken combo. (Why the falco didn't laser you and you just looked back at him for a few moments before fighting didn't seem right but it fitted the song very well). You have the right idea about chaingrabbing but you Really need to practice it as you couldn't do it well.

Second stock: You rolled abit too much and really set yourself up for that f-smash from falco, you seen it coming beforehand. You both got abit more sloppy but I guess thats fine... And whats with that edgeguard?..you guarded well with the d-tilt then leaped out and tried a reverse up-b?..no..do not do that often..you managed to kill him with it after the first failed attempt but its inconsistent and hard to pull off..and theres so many better options. Its fancy yes but don't do risky things that are un-needed. you actually started a chaingrab on falco when he got on his third stock..but you just let him fall as he was behind you then tried a delayed f-smash..once again, practice chaingrabbing.



Third stock: Once again with sloppiness..your stocks spacing and pressure seemed to decrease as you had less stocks. But that was pretty good leaping down there to interupt his up-b and you were careful with your up-b as to not bring him back..so good job there.



That falco wasn't too good but he seemed to be your peer so its good you have someone to play with like that. You have a decent gameplan and just need to perfect things and speed them up, you have the right idea for the most part..just do less full hops.

 

[Gian]

tnks fo the comment, yes that fit the song perfectly =D,

about the reverse up b i know i should't do it but since i got that ken combo out i wanted to loook better.

today i was with my shiek friend and did awesome matches with even 2 stocks ken combo and very neat stuff but idk y the did't ***** RECORDED!!!!! im so pissed about that, but well.

ill try to get more vids later