Critique my Marth movement

[Mikkelmann]

I want to improve on my movement and try to get better at it. I've can wave land onto the stage now but it's not shown in this video. This was from my stream so at the time I was talking to a friend about random things so you can just mute it or listen it does not matter. Let me know on what I need to improve on and my air dodging has gotten a lot lower since then. And if I die randomly it means I rolled. And at the end I was doing fox so you can just skip that. But i been practicing this so I've gotten a lot better (i hope). But I would love advice from this though and what i should improve on.

P.S sorry about the quality i'm poor ;(.

 

[20YY SS | Saiblade]

Oh, hey that's me! XD

 

[Mikkelmann]

Oh, hey that's me! XD

Why hello there

 

[AirFair]

Well, your wavedashes could use some work, since it looks like you aren't airdodging fast enough. Wavelands should be better too. What's going on when you roll? I know it forces death, but what are you trying to do?

 

[Mikkelmann]

Well, your wavedashes could use some work, since it looks like you aren't airdodging fast enough. Wavelands should be better too. What's going on when you roll? I know it forces death, but what are you trying to do?

Ya i'll upload an other one. Not roll anymore. What do you mean by not air dodging fast enough?

 

[AirFair]

Like, in the video you posted at least, you are wavedashing in a bumpy way, that isn't really a slide.