Critique my Marf

[Ballin]

Hey guys, I played some friendlies with the best players in my state last weekend and recorded some.
Sorry in advance for quality, but it's actually pretty good for Cam.

I feel like I'm at the point where I can see a lot of my mistakes.
Up until a month or two ago, I'd just get ***** and wouldn't understand why, but I'm starting to see why I'm getting fvcked up lol.

Marth vs Shiek
http://youtu.be/ftd_ucB-R_g

vs Samus
http://youtu.be/bnMtNt8vtTM
http://youtu.be/3fGvtOtEeSE

vs Fox
http://youtu.be/k_L6Dw777Nc

vs Marth
http://youtu.be/Kvhnzibz3_A
http://youtu.be/hWdy4yPuaCM

I'm kind of a noob, so bare with me. Let me know the major things I can work on. Thanks!

 

[standardtoaster]

You should post these in the Marth boards instead. Character specific things like this should go in their respective boards.

 

[Bones0]

Marth forums. derp

 

[Fregadero]

I think he posted there first?

 

[standardtoaster]

He posted this in Melee Discussion first. Someone moved the thread. That's it.

 

[Fregadero]

Not that I care but yeah he did lol

http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=14168035&postcount=2375

 

[Ballin]

yeah, I that thread was really slow and I thought I'd get faster responses this way.