critique my friends CF pleasee

[triforceofcourage787]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BB4bB8Hmkwc



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cqK4pvglygw


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJeYk4dEHx0


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9YaA2hdMTF8



there will be others of him fighting me and some other friends soon.

any advice is welcome. please be as nice as possible lol XD

 

[omG_A_coW]

I don't think your L canceling many of your aerials. Maybe im just tired but i think you're missing a lot of them. Other than that I not much of a critiquer.

 

[Rang Flash]

He's not fast enough and he makes alot of mistakes, such as rolling into attacks and missing tons of L-cancels.